FOR SHEEPY!

STEALIN' MY THUNDER AGAIN! ... :/ i definitely meant to end it where it ended, though.

Kiwi wrote:

STEALIN' MY THUNDER AGAIN! ... :/ i definitely meant to end it where it ended, though.

I can't help myself. My friend wrote a intro a one shot and I made 6 more chapters of it. Complete with plot and everything. Then I lost motivation.

What, i'm not that mean even if i don't like Justin Beiber. Although it sounded epic
"Oh wow Mike, you took them all out before we could even get here. SO PRO!" Jello was the first to say something. "Dammit Jello, you can run fast" Salt cried out, "Nah, you just getting fat" "I'm an elf, we outspeed humans" "Well I just outsped you so NEH!" Jello poked his tongue out. "Your asking for it Jello" salt readied his soul infused bow. "Children, quiet please, we have a cry baby on the team and we don't want him to cry any more" Beefie interrupted the two. "What you mean Beeby" Jello took his focus away from Salt. "HA! GOOD ONE JELLO!" Biscuit began to laugh.

I would have to say this is my favorite part of the story, and Sheepy going all apeshit on the swords.

Comedy, Action and Romance scenes are basically what I like writing, everything else is pretty blarg for me.

HOWEVER.

Back to where Viv, Mango, and Pudding were;

While Viv and Pudding were discussing about that VERY interesting dining table, Mango totally fell asleep. Viv and Pudding decided to draw all over his face. (<3) After a few minuets they heard the door bell ring and so Viv went to check out who it was. Pudding continued drawing on Mango's face, however.

"Noodle! Chili! Congrats you two~!" She glomps the both of them.

Noodle and Chili, being the non-mushy-in-front-of-others kind of couple, blushed.
"H-hey Viv! Are we the first ones here?" Said Noodle with a nervous laugh.
"Oh Naw. Mango and Pudding are in the dinning room."

The three of them went back in the house into the dining room where Mango's face ended up having a total makeover.

"Oh, Sawp guys~" said Pudding with a bit of satisfaction.
"..Nggh...Chili? Noodle? Hai~" Mango mummered, still half asleep.

Everyone smirked trying not to laugh.

"Whar is everyone else?" Asked Chili
"Dunno, But dinners ready in 30 mins" Answered Viv

//8 hours later//

The five of them die of starvation and waiting.



Then Pudding gets mauled by a truck.
The End.

cool story bro.

Does all you stories end with you being mauled by a truck D:

WELL THANKS FOR YOUR EXTENSION PUDDING, AND ALTHOUGH I APPRECIATE YOUR INPUT, DON'T. KTHX. IT SUCKS. AND I WANT FEEDBACK ON MY STORY.

I HATE YOU SO MUCH.

/RAGE.

i'm definitely kidding.
<3 i love you so much.
although it is rather unfortunate you keep on getting mauled by trucks...

No~



/truck'dd

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@Viv
Im sorry QUQ. I love your story though <33 I could never write that well.

What can I say? That truck is a mean poop.

I LOVE YOUR STORY KIWI! SO MUCH THAT IT MADE ME WRITE MY OWN!

Pudding i have to say that is a really graphic ending. REALLY GRAPHIC.

Pudding there's way too many trucks LOLOL!
Anyways Vivi, Jello, and Pudding nice writing :'D